According, to the text" An education in Citizenship" the Illinois house have passed an bill that allows young individuals who are in the United States illegally to pay instate tuition rates at any Illinois colleges or university that they go to. " No one wants to see any able student deprived of a good higher education". I agree with this statement that everyone should be able to better themselves education wise, but we should not bend the law for the non citizen people, just so they can get an education. No one should be able to attend any college and get the same benfit an U.S citizen is getting if they have no legal right being here in this county.
Illegally citizens shouldnt be treated the same as llegal citizens. U.S citizens work for their benifits, illegal citizens just trys to find theri way to get over just to get into this country. The citizenship shouldnt be bent because it will deprive citizens of the nation and the states of what they have the right to expect.
The government shouldn't insist on citizenship, if they were going to bend the rules some how for illegal citizens.
In my opinion, it's very clear to understand what is your opinion about the statement in the article. However, it's a too short essay so it needs more paragraphs to be completed. you need to summarize other ideas of the article in the introduction not only idea that you think the most important. Alos in the body paragraph, you have to give us at least two specific examples that support your opinion to make readers agree with you.
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